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Letting go by Words-from-my-Soul Letting go by Words-from-my-Soul
Letting go by me
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twinteen Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Hobbyist
I love this poem Heart - Free 
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Words-from-my-Soul Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, glad you like it :D
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TruthDawnsinFire Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist

hmm I can't say I agree with this one, I like the part about not ending up with ifs and buts and not living in the past or letting things drag you down but the second line bothers me a bit.


If you hide your feelings they fester and grow

leading you to darkness and spreading it 'round

I wont do it, because I can only reap what I sow


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Words-from-my-Soul Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hmm nobody said you have to agree with everything and seriously please in every comment you made about my poems you act like ike you're an expert and a know it all which you're not.
Poems are written to be open to interpretation, you can't just come along and and think that you're the Simon Cowell of poetry...Seriously dude.
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Words-from-my-Soul Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
All my poems can have different meanings or interpretations to anyone.
The second line which you don't like and took it upon yourself to change it all for me means in my interpretation that you try not to show your feelings so it doesn't show so you can stay strong.
Didn't mean to hide them completely and ignore them.
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TruthDawnsinFire Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Firstly I was not changing your poem at all I was merely sharing my opinion on the matter in poem form, it was certainly not a suggestion for your poem. I honestly didn't mean to offend you at all because you're right, poems are open to interpretation and all I was doing was giving you my interpretation, I thought you might like getting a comment and a little feedback is all and really I'm sorry if I'm coming across as a know it all because I've never said and never will say that I know it all or that I would even want to.
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Words-from-my-Soul Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I don't mind a bit of critism but you really do go a bit too far.
Poetry is from the heart, it's what someone is feeling at that particular moment and that's how the words come.
If you read through my poems you'll notice they can mean many things, letting go could mean letting go of anything and also a metaphor for something else.
There is no right or wrong way to do poetry if it's from the heart :)
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TruthDawnsinFire Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
is very true and I really am sorry, I didn't mean to :)
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Words-from-my-Soul Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It's okay :)
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